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makeste ([personal profile] makeste) wrote2009-11-13 02:08 am

I should be asleep.

But I am not!


1. Hello there, Gokudera, aren't we looking incredibly female today! Did Amano accidentally copy-paste your torso onto Bianchi's hips? Well, no matter, I suppose, seeing as this is the only page in this chapter in which you're not looking incredibly attractive. Move along, move along.


2. I would just like to point out that page two is LITERALLY the only page in this entire chapter that does not have Gokudera on it. FUCK YOU, PAGE TWO.

You notice how everyone in the bottom panel is actually standing around LOOKING for Gokudera? IT'S BECAUSE THEY KNEW SOMETHING WAS AFOUL.


3. LOL, it's okay everyone, he's perky. |D

And okay, I'll bite--exactly WHEN did he injure his back?? This was the only panel we got of him fighting Torikabuto and co., and he freaking BLOCKED THE ATTACK. And here we see him again, tsuning at Ryohei's awesomeness. Note that this is after the illusiony funtimes, and HE IS CLEARLY STILL INTACT. And yet, four pages later he's suddenly down for the count? It doesn't add up, dammit. Which annoys me (it annoyed me back then and it annoys me still!), because his being injured BUT NOBLY FIGHTING ANYWAY was like the main plot point for this whole chapter, and yet the injury itself is completely RANDOM and UNEXPLAINED.

The only reason I'm not complaining even more is because it turned out to be an awesome plot point.


4. Awww, he actually said exactly what everyone's been thinking. XD Suddenly I feel bad for whining about his recent string of failures. I DIDN'T MEAN TO PRESSURE YOU, HONEY.

And Lal wants to be cool too. |D And of course Tsuna says he won't allow it, and under normal circumstances his concern for his subordinates would be admirable, except that this is the friggin' END OF THE WORLD we're talking about, as opposed to, "Sweetie, I don't think you should play in the football game this Saturday because your back is still bothering you." This is when you have to start thinking a little harder about those judgment calls, tiny boss. XD


5. ...So yeah, unfortunately, in the end Zakuro's freak transformation turned out to be just as hilarious as the other two, just in a different way. XD He looks like Crazy!Psycho!Kyuubi!Naruto except with flaming wings instead of tails. Which, I must admit, apparently makes all the difference, because he does somehow manage to be at least a little intimidating in spite of the lulz.

It's times like this I wonder where Basil has wandered off to.

But seriously, look at his face! THOSE TEETH! I don't know whether to laugh or cry.


6. Okay, I couldn't help but kind of awww and at the same time be amused that Dera is actually concerned over Gamma. XD I mean, OF COURSE HE IS, THE FOOL JUST GOT NAILED BY A T-REX, but a part of me still can't help but remember that this is the guy who ALMOST TORTURED HIM TO DEATH what, barely a month ago? And then they became rivals, and now they're good buds. That is like, the essence of shounen right there.

Hell, and at least Gamma got an exclamation point. Lal just gets dots. Lal...! ;_;


7. HELL YEAAAAHHH. URI, FORM CHAAAAAANGE...

INTO THE G. ARCHERY (???), ALSO KNOWN AS, "SEXY BOW THAT IS ON FIRE AND IS SEXY"!!

OBSERVATIONS:

  • Stormy the First's bow is clearly NOT on fire, and thus inferior, though he tries to make up for it with that sexy flame tattoo of his. (And SUCCEEDS! But don't tell him that, it'll only boost his ego which is clearly already through the roof. JUST LOOK AT THAT SMUG, SMUG, SEXY... I'm sorry, I lost my train of thought there.)
  • Oh my God, and Stormy Primo also fought with a gun. Somehow that's really hot.
  • Lol at his old-school cigarette. How long ago were the first gen guys running around, anyway? I know this has come up at the comm recently; what was it, like a hundred years or so? Well, okay, I guess they had cigarettes then, so it's all good.
  • Gokudera's storm gun thingy now suddenly looks like a futuristic sports car that is also on fire for some reason.
  • You can't see it because the panel cuts him off, but I guarantee you that Gokudera's shirt is flying up. You can't fight the laws of nature.
  • HOT. I don't feel this can be said enough. HOT HOT HOT. <3333

Ahem.


8. And now we get to the serious business part of the chapter. |D Tsuna starts to replicate his speech during the Storm Ring battle almost word-for-word, but this time, SOMETHING IS DIFFERENT! Namely, that Gokudera has decided to defy the Tenth for the first time ever omg. WHAT WILL COME OF THIS?


9. Why, a cheesy shounen speech and moment of character development, of course! "Throughout the many battles we've fought in together, I've come to realize that the right arm you need is not just strong and fearless in the face of danger. The right arm I aim to become now is different from the past. The right arm of Vongola Decimo that I aim for is... one who is able to share laughter with the boss, and does whatever he can to survive for that sake!"

;_________________;

Do I even need to say just how far Gokudera has come as a character for him to be able to say that? He just acknowledged that strength is not the most important thing, and that his own survival, on the other hand, is important (Deraaaaa ;_; HAVE YOU FINALLY DEVELOPED SELF-WORTH??). And on top of that, he did this all while TAKING A STAND AGAINST THE TENTH for the very first time because it's that important. And he talks about "us." Not just him and Tsuna, us--"Tenth and the family and I and not one soul missing", and that's the biggest thing of all, because it shows that he might have finally started really thinking of himself as part of that family, and THAT IS JUST A REALLY DAMNED BIG DEAL, OKAY?


10. And just look at him go. If that doesn't punch a hole right through DinoZakuro after a speech like THAT, there's no hope for the world. I eagerly anticipate the next chapter in which we discuss possibilities for Zakuro's tombstone. |D


And since it's now 2 am and I've made about fifty million typos during the course of typing this up, OFF TO BED I GO.

[identity profile] kat8cha.livejournal.com 2009-11-13 07:41 am (UTC)(link)
HE IS NO LONGER SUICIDAL

I say HURRAH FOR GOKUDERA

However. Srsly. Bow and arrow.

[identity profile] makeste.livejournal.com 2009-11-13 09:12 pm (UTC)(link)
IT ONLY TOOK HUNDREDS OF CHAPTERS! |D PROGRESS.

...what is wrong with a bow and arrow.

[identity profile] kat8cha.livejournal.com 2009-11-13 09:58 pm (UTC)(link)
...it's.

Well. I suppose I shouldn't care, because, I mean, we've had swords and capes and handcuffs.

:( BUT WHAT IS WRONG WITH GUNS>

[identity profile] makeste.livejournal.com 2009-11-13 10:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Guns are not nearly outlandish enough. Although it is kind of a shame, because if Gokudera had had a flaming gun for his box weapon the manliness would have managed to override even the extreme girliness of the cover page. But alas.

I just really want to see Lambo and Ryohei's weapons now. XD

[identity profile] ekmisao.livejournal.com 2009-11-13 07:43 am (UTC)(link)
Goodnight.

59 flew quite a distance both in the Choice fight and in that battle at Kawahira's place, so Amano is right about those affecting his back.

That's a cheesy shonen manga speech that worked, I totally grant Amano-san that one. Partly because 59 has always been angsty and cheesy his way, and I'm happy for him.

[identity profile] makeste.livejournal.com 2009-11-13 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Heh, thanks.

Well yeah, but my point was that he had seemed fine (and during the Choice battle it was his arm that seemed to be injured if anything) right up until that panel in 263 where he was suddenly horribly wounded. I still say it makes no sense. XD

Lol, yes, I love how Tsuna and Reborn and the rest just totally backed down after that. FEAR HIS HEARTFELT WORDS. And somehow the whole thing was completely believable and IC in spite of the clichedness, so basically I loved it. <3

[identity profile] caddles.livejournal.com 2009-11-13 09:10 am (UTC)(link)
Dude, he's looking pretty fine on the front cover there. I had to stop and check out his tummy for a long minute. ;;

Gokudera was so awesome in this chapter. ; ____; ''

And so sentimental and CUTE and ahhhh... finally defying his precious Tenth because he wants to be a better Family member. Gokudera you are so - cute - !! And he's grown up so much. I feel rather proud of him. //sniff

And lol, they're fighting a dinosaur.
I swore out loud. The villians couldn't get any better!

[identity profile] makeste.livejournal.com 2009-11-13 09:21 pm (UTC)(link)
But his HIPS. Those are not man-hips. WHAT HAPPENED TO THE SEXY TUMMY FROM CHAPTER 262? ...Okay, on second glance, I guess it really doesn't look that different. XD But still something seems off!

I knooooow, I was just squeeing from start to finish. First he was being awesome with his box weapon, and then he was being awesome with his determined shounen speech. He's matured so much over this arc. I TOO AM PROUD.

AND NOT JUST ANY DINOSAUR, BUT A T-REX. I am now dying to know what Kikyo and Bluebell (and Ghost, I suppose) will turn into. Because how on earth could they top that?

[identity profile] nilly-chan.livejournal.com 2009-11-13 10:20 am (UTC)(link)
Awawawawaw~~ I love this chapter SO MUCH. ;____;

But Gokudera has actually fallen on his back a lot recently (unless I remember incorrectly), and a back that's messing with you can really frikkin hurt and be a pretty big problem. >___O

But as IF that would stop Gokudera~~ :DD

And yeah, Tsuna's refusal to let Gokudera play football go against Zakuro just kind of proves that he's still fail!boss!Tsuna. xD He has yet a long way to go be fore he reaches TYL!awesome!boss!Tsuna. :P

Super-mega-special-sexy-awesome Stormy the first's bow isn't on fire because it's not a box. XD It's just a bow. And now I want Gokudera to start using guns... because, HOT. 8D

It's a cheesy shounen speech, but it's a very much needed one. Because Gokudera has grown as a person and we as an audience must be given really obvious proof of this because readers are stupid. :'D (But I'm still not overly convinced that he's really developed self-worth. He just doesn't want to hurt others by hurtig himself is how I see it. XD He's come to realize that even if he doesn't like himself, others do. XD)

WHY MUST THIS AWESOME CHAPTER COME WHEN I'M SWAMPED WITH AN ESSAY SO I AM FORCED TO WAIT WITH MY COLOURING UNTIL I'VE FINISHED SAID ESSAY?!

[identity profile] makeste.livejournal.com 2009-11-13 09:35 pm (UTC)(link)
I AGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT.

I seriously don't remember him falling on his back at all. I mean, unless you count that time Kikyo blew him up (THAT BITCH), but we never actually saw whether he landed on his back, and afterwards he was cradling his arm, so it didn't look like a back injury. And I thought they had a healing round after that and then he rode a shark and stuff anyway.

Blah. But then, it's not like I haven't had my share of back problems, so I guess he could have gotten some debilitating injury offscreen for all I know. All it takes is one wrong move and you're screwed, so.

But Tsuna has seriously got to learn how to weigh the situation and respond accordingly. What was he planning to do, fight off the rest of the Funeral Wreaths with like the two characters who aren't injured? Yeah, that'd go over real well. XD

LOL, I KNOW WHY IT'S NOT ON FIRE, I'm just saying, too bad it isn't. XD And I so want him to get a gun too. I know it kind of undermines the whole Smokin' Bomb thing, but damn it, it's not like he's even touched the bombs in forever and an age anyway.

I dunno, at the very least, he's developed enough faith in himself to argue Tsuna down because for once he thinks he's right and the Tenth is wrong. Normally he'd just be like, "Okay, if Tenth says so then I have no choice, because he's always right by virtue of his being the Tenth." BUT THIS TIME HE TOOK A STAND, and then waxed poetic about how he wants to laugh by Tsuna's side. <3 That does suggest to me that he's staring to see himself as a person with at least a little value, even if it is still more because Tsuna values him than anything else. BUT WHAT AM I DOING RAMBLING ON AND ON. ANYWAY.

GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR ESSAY/ o/ FIGHT ON!

[identity profile] nilly-chan.livejournal.com 2009-11-13 10:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Huh, well... he did here, didn't he? Or am I seeing that wrong? Oh well, shrug. Word of god is that he hurt his back, so he must have hurt his back at some point.

Tsuna believes in the power of his uninjured friends. xD He believes in them so much he thinks that they can take down ALL of the funeral wreaths on their own. xD

Hahaha, I know! Obvious statement was obvious. XD In other news: Gokudera is hot. :P Who says Gokudera can't use both guns and bombs? Ever thought of THAT possibility? :D

HE IS AT LEAST STARTING TO BELIEVE IN HIS OWN GENIUS AND ABILITY TO JUDGE A SITUATION. XD Because Tsuna failed that. xD

IT'S NOT WORKING OUT FOR ME! I'VE COLOURED MORE THAN I'VE WRITTEN ON MY ESSAY. FAIL. D:

[identity profile] makeste.livejournal.com 2009-11-13 10:34 pm (UTC)(link)
...I'm not sure. It's hard to tell, because I can't tell if they're being flung around in mid-air or on the ground in that panel. XD THERE'S NO GOOD REFERENCE FOR WHERE THE GROUND IS, SO I CAN'T EVEN TELL IF THEY'RE VERTICAL OR HORIZONTAL, orz.

Oh sure, him, Gamma, Lambo, and the girls... was there even anyone else? Maybe he was gambling on Reborn pulling through for them all (which only goes to show that he's learned nothing). XD But anyway, yes, absolutely they would all be fine. GOOD LOGIC THERE, TSUNA.

Frankly, if he doesn't start using guns at some point this manga will have failed me. Amano, you know what has to be done.

BUT THAT ALONE IS PROGRESS! I mean, he's miles from the same kid who used to be constantly almost blowing himself up, and who needed lessons on teamwork from Yamamoto and Uri. Now he's working together with the family to realize their goal of returning to their peaceful home. <3 And he's clearly gaining more confidence. Self-esteem can't be long now! NEXT ARC, PERHAPS? XD

XD I KNOW GOKUDERA'S HOTNESS IS IMPORTANT, BUT SCHOOLWORK IS IMPORTANT TOOOO... D:

[identity profile] nilly-chan.livejournal.com 2009-11-13 10:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahaha, this is true. IT IS A RATHER CONFUSING IMAGE. XD

But Tsuna has ~*~faith~*~ in them! Surely that must be enough? xD

Gokudera with a gun is something I think we're all waiting for. Yum.

THIS IS TRUE. He's gotten so grown up. ;___; I'm so proud over him! XD

BUT I'M JUST NOT GETTING ANYWHERE ON MY STUPID ESSAY, AND IT'S MUCH MORE FUN TO COLOUR THAT IT IS TO WRITE ESSAYS. T____T

Ugh, I wish I was better at colouring, but here we go.

[identity profile] nilly-chan.livejournal.com 2009-11-15 12:34 pm (UTC)(link)
I finished colouring but I still haven't finished my essay, I fail.

It exist in three versions, the only difference between them is the colour of Stormy the first's hair. XD

Number one - Brown, because I totally believed that Gokudera was a brunette in the beginning. Finding out that he wasn't made me SO SAD. ;___;
Number two - Orange, IDEK. XDDD
Number three - Red, because I have a thing for anime/manga guys with red hair. IDK why, I just do. XD

The background is FAIL, but I had no idea what to do with it. XD
If you wonder why I didn't just give Stormy the first silver hair like Gokudera, then I'll just say that it's because I didn't want to give him the exact same colour theme. He also has more tanned skin. XD

If you were any better at coloring the WORLD WOULD EXPLODE, goddamn.

[identity profile] makeste.livejournal.com 2009-11-15 05:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Finish the essay!

And now that I have covered the responsible part of this post...


...




......

...so do you still want that giant post praising you and your coloring, because I am so in a praising mood right about now. XDDD

That is awesome. AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME. I love the coloring on Gokudera, I love the coloring of the G. Archery (the flamessss are so coooool), I even love the background because it adds to the whole FIRE FIRE HELL YEAH moodiness of the pic, and OH MY GOD, STORM PRIMO, WHY SO FUCKING HOT?! He looks amazing in all three versions, but I think I like the first best just because it looks best with the background, I think. (Also, in the second pic he totally reminds me of Tasuki from Fushigi Yuugi.)

DID I MENTION IT WAS AWESOME? And you are the awesomest of all for coloring it. <3333

NO, IT WOULDN'T! XD

[identity profile] nilly-chan.livejournal.com 2009-11-15 05:46 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm almost done!

Hey, if you don't mind I'd be happy to get one. I mean, being praised is FUN. XD

I'm also partial to the brown hair. The red looks good on him, but it melts into the background too much. XD (Brown was also the first version I did. XD) UGH, Fushigi Yuugi.

YES, YOU DID. XD Aww, thank you. <3333

IT TOTALLY POSSIBLY COULD.

[identity profile] makeste.livejournal.com 2009-11-16 03:14 am (UTC)(link)
Congrats on finishing it! ...I almost typed "fishing" instead of "finishing." I don't even know why.

I sort of went ahead and did it. Yeah. Cuz, you know, YOU DESERVE IT. XD

It looks good on him, and now I'm sort of half-wishing Dera had been a brunet too. XD LOL IT WAS SUCH A TRAINWRECK, BUT THE GUYS WERE STILL HOT.

Re: IT TOTALLY POSSIBLY COULD.

[identity profile] nilly-chan.livejournal.com 2009-11-16 07:02 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm so relieved that I did.

... Oh man, lol. XD I still can't believe you did it. XD

I was so sad over Dera not being a brunette in the beginning, but now I like his silver hair. I also have a small urge to try some other hair colours on Stormy nr 1, just because. IT TRULY WAS A TRAIN WRECK, BUT I MANAGED TO LOOK AWAY QUITE EARLY. XD

[identity profile] theprerogative.livejournal.com 2009-11-13 11:09 am (UTC)(link)
2. I would just like to point out that page two is LITERALLY the only page in this entire chapter that does not have Gokudera on it. FUCK YOU, PAGE TWO.

FUCK YOU, PAGE TWO.



YOU KNOW THE STORM PRIMO LOOKS MORE LIKE SQUALO THAT JUST GOT SMACKED IN THE FACE BY XANXUS' BLOODY MARY (which dripped all over him) and TREX??? RYOHEI WILL B HAPPY AND IF I REMBR RIGHT 59 LIKES DINOSAURS TOO? Or is this fanon D:

Also, on a proper somber note, I love how 59 has finally grown up. It makes me so happy that I nearly am willing to forgive all the failures Amano put him through.


Nearly.

[identity profile] dame-batsie.livejournal.com 2009-11-13 12:49 pm (UTC)(link)
YOU KNOW THE STORM PRIMO LOOKS MORE LIKE SQUALO
BUTTING IN HERE TO SAY THAT I NOTICED THE SAME THING WHEN THE SPOILER PICS FIRST CAME OUT. MY MIND WAS RACING OVER A SMOKING, TATTOOED SQUALO BUT, ALAS, THAT WAS NOT THE CASE. ;_;

I can forgive it because this chapter was hot and Gokudera so awwwwwww

[identity profile] theprerogative.livejournal.com 2009-11-13 01:29 pm (UTC)(link)
IKR. EXCEPT I THINK XANXUS IS TOO MAN FOR A BLOODY MARY SO MAYB GOKKUN WAS COSPLAYING? ;DDDDDDDD

I'm Gokkun biased so as long as Amano draws his beautiful being IDRC.

[identity profile] dame-batsie.livejournal.com 2009-11-13 08:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Gokkun cosplaying as Squalo in order to get Xanxus's romantic attention?

HMMMMMMMMMM

[identity profile] theprerogative.livejournal.com 2009-11-14 10:08 am (UTC)(link)
I'M SURE XANXUS WILL DRAG HIM BACK BY HIS SORRY SHARKY TAIL.

[identity profile] makeste.livejournal.com 2009-11-13 09:39 pm (UTC)(link)
PAGE TWO CAN JUST GO TO HELL.

LOL, this cracked me up because [livejournal.com profile] dame_batsie said the same thing. XD Which she already told you, but yeah. I CAN SORT OF SEE IT, EXCEPT THAT GOKUDERA STANDING THERE IN THE FOREGROUND KEEPS DRAGGING MY THOUGHTS BACK TO HIM AND NOT SQUALO. But there's got to be some relation between those two. How many guys in Italy are walking around with premature white/gray hair, anyway? (AND SQUALO HAS ALREADY BEEN MISTAKEN FOR BIANCHI IN PREVIOUS COLOR PAGES, HMM.)

I have totally 100% already forgiven her, I'm sorry to say. I am so easily bought it's not even funny. Storm Primo would have been enough; his "refined vision of the right arm" speech was just delicious icing on the cake. OH GOKUDERA I LOVE YOU SO MUCH THERE ARE NOT EVEN WORDS. <3

[identity profile] theprerogative.livejournal.com 2009-11-14 10:10 am (UTC)(link)
/KICKS PAGE TWO INTO SPARTA

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL WELL I MISTOOK GOKUDERA FOR BIANCHI IN THE 1ST PAGE SO--

His refined vision of the right hand man speech made my day so much, IDE <333333

[identity profile] dame-batsie.livejournal.com 2009-11-13 12:51 pm (UTC)(link)
KHR really does have everything: guns, time traveling, sea slug missiles, floating Byakuran heads that shoot lasers, and, now, dinosaurs. XDDDD

DUDE I REALLY WANT A PINUP SHOT OF FIRST GEN VONGOLA.

[identity profile] makeste.livejournal.com 2009-11-13 09:43 pm (UTC)(link)
I am trying to figure out what outlandish things Kikyo and Bluebell will transform into now. The randomer the better. Unicorns? Octopi? Bears?

--OH MY GOD. Okay, whichever one fights Ryohei absolutely HAS to turn into a bear now.

THE INSTANT SHE REVEALS THE LAST ONE, YOU KNOW THE VERY NEXT WEEK WILL FEATURE A COLOR PAGE SPREAD OF THAT HOTNESS. I can't wait. 8D

[identity profile] caffeinexsugar.livejournal.com 2009-11-16 05:49 am (UTC)(link)
That's it. My fangirl-flame for Gokudera-kun is finally, completely rekindled. This chapter was no less than heavenly for me, because I read shounen mangas for shounen manga cheesiness. What is a shounen manga without "I became a better person for my nakama's sake!" anyway? XD

If Amano was deliberately putting Goku-kun through all those failures to highlight THIS moment, she's a genius.

Btw I DO want to see Kikyo transforming into a unicorn. Somehow I have a belief that Bluebell will be a sea animal... I just hope it's not a sea anemone.

[identity profile] makeste.livejournal.com 2009-11-16 07:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh man, so agreed. I live for shounen cheesiness; the whole reason Gokudera became my favorite character in the first place was because of his tendency to have moments like this where he just floored me with his determination. I know; getting stronger to protect your friends is what shounen's all about, after all.

I don't know if she did it intentionally or not, but it sure had that effect.

Lol, I'm totally game for that, so long as Ryohei's not the one who fights him. :P And Bluebell being a sea creature wouldn't surprise me (she has that kind of vibe). But that sort of scares me to think about, because depending on what kind of sea creature, hers could easily be the freakiest transformation out of all of them. XD