I love love love this fic. The ending was a bit of a shock to me, and I had to reread the last couple of sections twice in order to understand what was going on. But once I got it...wow.
I really like how this is told from Yamamoto's POV...I felt like I could literally see him piecing everything together in his head. And your characterization was spot on. I love how Gokudera keeps ghost hunting equipment in his closet (you know this is totally canon) and his initial reaction at having two of himself in his own head.
The only thing I couldn't quite wrap my head around was how the part of Yamamoto that got left behind after he was killed was also able to go back in time with Gokudera the second time around.
I think this is one of my fave KHR fics ever. &hearts
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I really like how this is told from Yamamoto's POV...I felt like I could literally see him piecing everything together in his head. And your characterization was spot on. I love how Gokudera keeps ghost hunting equipment in his closet (you know this is totally canon) and his initial reaction at having two of himself in his own head.
The only thing I couldn't quite wrap my head around was how the part of Yamamoto that got left behind after he was killed was also able to go back in time with Gokudera the second time around.
I think this is one of my fave KHR fics ever. &hearts