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psqqa ([personal profile] psqqa) wrote in [personal profile] makeste 2010-11-08 02:25 am (UTC)

LOVE IT.

Yeah, don't even worry, it made perfect sense to me! Which is one of the things I loved most about it. I really felt like you put a lot of thought into making the whole time travel pitfall of paradoxes make some modicum of sense. I always appreciate that in a fic.

And I do so love it when the two of them get together and become this insanely awesome team of competence, determination, and friendship. Even more so when Shouichi is involved (which stems from my deep-seated desire to see Shouichi and Gokudera eventually bond over their mutual genius and love of music to then form a friendship of math, music, and nerdy badassery). Bonus!Asshole!Byakuran is always welcome.

But dear God am I happy you put in the epilogue. After an entire fic centred around their brilliant plan to Keep Yamamoto (and Gokudera. I really ought to have seen that one coming...) Alive, only to see it fail! I could not have taken.

Um, yes. So. A+, MY LOVELY, A+.


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